The membership of the Southern Indiana Writers Group has changed over the twenty or so years we’ve been together. Some of us have been there the whole time. Others have left, and new members have joined. So, when I began the rewrite on the book formerly known as Eel’s Reverence (first published as Eel’s Revenge), I decided I couldn’t do better than to take it and read it to the group, a chapter at a time.
I knew that the chances were good that the new members would catch things we missed in our earlier days. Sure enough, one of our long-time members caught something and one of our new members caught something else.
The main character is a woman, a priest of Micah, a holy man of legend. The main conflict is between her and the priests of a section of coastline called The Eel, who are mercenary hypocrites. Her spiritual stance and behavior are central to the action. And what did I forget?
She’s hidden by a family who had prepared a secret room, certain that a “true” priest would come to them, eventually. And I forgot to have them put an altar in the room.
Although she’s always saying to others or thinking to herself about what a priest of Micah would do, she never has an inner dialog with Micah, the way Christians pray to God the Father, Jesus, Mary, or a saint. I could pretend I decided priests of Micah don’t do that, but that would be a lie. I just left it out. Didn’t think of it. Missed the obvious.
I know why I did it: I was thinking about other parts of the story construction. But that’s what rewrites are for, and that’s especially what getting new eyes on something is for: reminding us of the obvious things we overlooked in writing and editing and rewriting and revising and reworking. And I still missed the obvious!
A WRITING PROMPT FOR YOU: Is there anything obvious you’ve overlooked in your main character or setting?