Final Order of a Mail Order Bride #amwriting @StoryADayMay #ThursdayDoors

Thursday Doors is the invention of Norm Frampton, photographer extraordinaire. On Thursday, dooristas from all over the world post pictures (or, in my case during May, stories) with doors in. Visit Norm’s blog for wonderful pictures, click on the blue froggy link at the end of his post, and see who else has been on a doorscursion.

Final Order for a Mail-Order Bride

by Marian Allen

Isabella had misrepresented herself in her own Lonely Hearts letter, so she didn’t fault Aaron for doing the same.

She (Izzy, to her friends) had said she was a widow of great domestic accomplishment. She was actually the spoiled younger daughter of a nouveau riche merchant who had defied her family by running away with a cad who had seduced and abandoned her. She was left facing either life on the streets or lying her way into a second chance.

Aaron had said he was a planter with a thousand acres and a mansion. He may have had the thousand acres, but only an acre was cleared, and only part of that was planted – and, by “planted,” he meant he had a kitchen garden big enough for eating and canning. His “mansion” was a two-room cabin with no windows.

There were holes in the walls, though. There were holes just the height for Aaron to see out of with other holes just the height for him to stick his rifle through and shoot, when the Indians whose land Aaron claimed attacked the “mansion.”

Izzy had to stand on a stool to fire the second-best rifle. Aaron said she might as well do something to earn her keep, since she sure didn’t know how to cook or clean. Her other accomplishment, taught her by the cad while he was promising to marry her, disgusted her husband; he felt that a good woman should endure domestic bliss. If he wanted a woman who enjoyed his intimacies, he went to town.

He spent so much time in town at Miss Farthingale’s Boarding House for Young Ladies and Good-Time Saloon, Izzy fantasized about shooting him when he came home and claiming she didn’t recognize him. Or that she had mistaken him for a marauding Indian come to take her scalp if not her actual person.

Aaron was currently out hunting. Izzy tossed an onion into the soup pot. She had a vague notion that she should have taken off the flaky outside, or cut away those little roots on one end and the brown stalky thing at the other, but she had washed it, which was an improvement over the last time she’d made soup.

A vociferous altercation between the chickens and Aaron’s dog alerted her that her lord and master had returned.

Did she dare not let him in? Did she dare try her marksmanship?

He pounded on the thick door made from a single plank of one of the massive oaks he’d cleared for his homestead. The stump, the cabin built around it, rose from the dirt floor and served them as a table.

Aaron kicked the door, no doubt spraying mud and dead leaves all over the porch, which he’d expect her to sweep away.

“Lemme in, dammit! Now, woman!”

She scooped the debris from her food preparations into her apron and cast it into the fire. A carrot peel plopped into the stew pot, but she couldn’t worry about that.

She lifted the bar and opened the door.

Aaron stomped in, propped his rifle against the wall, and tossed a brace of rabbits onto the “table.”

“Clean those up. I want ’em on the table when I wake up. Then I’m goin’ into town. Understand?”

She had stopped protesting that she wasn’t stupid, since he never heard anything she said.

From the cabin’s second room, Izzy heard the creak of the leather webbing as he sat on the loveless marriage bed, the double clunk of his boots, and his gusty sigh as he stretched out to rest before his night of pleasure.

As she closed the outside door, she paused to contemplate the open sky, the fresh leaves of the surrounding woods, the path to town, the barn that the cabin seemed an outgrowth of, where their cow and horse sheltered from possible attack while The Master was away.

When Aaron woke, he found the rabbits cleaned and on the table: Izzy had washed them in the warm stew water, toweled them dry with Aaron’s Sunday shirt, and laid them out on their backs with their paws crossed over their chests and holding daisies.

She was gone, and so was the horse. Aaron would find them both at Miss Farthingale’s, where Izzy was destined to become a favorite and, eventually, be Miss Farthingale, herself.

The frontier was, as she had hoped, the place to pursue a second chance. Or a third.

MY PROMPTS TODAY: scalp relief

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I was born in Louisville, Kentucky, but now live in the woods in southern Indiana. Though I only write fiction, I love to read non-fiction. The more I learn about this world, the more fantastic I see it is.

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One thought on “Final Order of a Mail Order Bride #amwriting @StoryADayMay #ThursdayDoors

  1. janet

    May 18, 2017 at 2:30pm

    I enjoyed the story but don’t see a photo of a door. Is the door just in the story? Help, I’m so confused.


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      Marian Allen

      May 18, 2017 at 3:32pm

      Yes, the door was in the story. Maybe I’d better not post my link during May unless I have a door PHOTO. 🙂

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  2. janet

    May 18, 2017 at 2:31pm

    I also can’t leave a like because it’s not loading. Sorry. 🙁

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      Marian Allen

      May 18, 2017 at 3:33pm

      I don’t know what’s happened to my Like button! I’m about to start stapling LOST posters to telephone poles!

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  3. jesh StG

    May 18, 2017 at 3:22pm

    “Aaron kicked the door …” – is that your door?:):)

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  4. Deborah

    May 18, 2017 at 7:28pm

    Clever! Your “like” button is loading, so I’ll just share the story. 🙂

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  5. joey

    May 18, 2017 at 10:00pm

    Scalp relief. Heh.
    Next time there’s no photo of the door, you must provide a DRAWRING. 😉 The door police will kick down your door, Marian. Arrest you for your WORDING.
    Also, I’m sicka this form! Why can’t it remember me like it used to?!? What did I ever to do it?!?

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      Marian Allen

      May 19, 2017 at 11:00am

      I never thought of doing a drawring. I’ll have to bemember that this coming Thursday. Mind you, mine won’t be adoowaboo, like your drawrings. Just don’t expect that. And I’m sorry about the form. I thought I had disabled it, but maybe I can’t. Damn spammers make everything harder for everybody. 🙁

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  6. Pete Laberge

    May 18, 2017 at 10:23pm

    I cannot figure out if this ultra-realistic tale might not be a true story, with the names and details changed to protect the innocent!
    Should it be on NBC, FOX, or The Onion?

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  7. Gordon

    May 20, 2017 at 12:21am

    Cool, so in our minds, we’re all seeing a different “same” door!

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  8. Norm 2.0

    May 20, 2017 at 11:20am

    Ahh the good ole days when married couples knew there roles, right?
    No I didn’t think so either 😉
    Scary to think that attitudes like this are still considered normal in many places.
    Nicely done 🙂

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      Marian Allen

      May 20, 2017 at 12:16pm

      Thanks, Norm! Yeah, sadly, this guy was more in line with acceptable practice than was Pa Engles on the Little House show.

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