An Unworthy Prayer

The narrator is Connie Phelan, a TerraNet holovision comedy star. She’s on vacation as a guest of one of the most exclusive social groups on Earth, hoping to move up from guest to membership. Darryl is one of the high-status members. Honey is his guest, but he’s trying to boost his own status by romancing a higher-status group member.

An Unworthy Prayer

by Marian Allen

Darryl smoothed his hair and settled his lapels.

“I’ll go wait for her in the lounge. Tell Honey we won’t be sharing a table for two after all, will you?”

merit badge“Why don’t you wait in the kitchen? Maybe you can watch them boil some live lobsters.”

The punch he landed knocked me into the wall so hard I dislodged the sign I’d hung there earlier.

It, my book player, and my calculated cynicism clattered to the deck.

For a few seconds, I was too shocked to breathe. Then I knotted my fists, but kept them at my sides. I knew if I could hit as hard as I wanted to hit, I’d kill him.

“That’s right,” he said. “You know better, don’t you? You don’t quite dare.”

“You don’t impress me, hotshot, not in the least. Every dog is allowed one bite, and this was yours. If you ever hit me again, you’d better make it a good one, because it’ll be your last.”

“I’ll do what I like with you. You see if I don’t.”

He stepped toward me, flicked the tip of my nose, and walked away.

“Jesus, Mary, and Joseph,” I prayed, “let him slip and fall on his can.”

It was an unworthy prayer, and the answer to it was No.


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A WRITING PROMPT FOR YOU: What is your main character’s unworthy prayer?



I was born in Louisville, Kentucky, but now live in the woods in southern Indiana. Though I only write fiction, I love to read non-fiction. The more I learn about this world, the more fantastic I see it is.

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One thought on “An Unworthy Prayer

  1. Dan

    April 9, 2017 at 7:06am

    Yeah, you have to take care of some things yourself. Next time, pray for a better right hook.

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      Marian Allen

      April 9, 2017 at 7:44am

      Good one, Dan! I wish I’d thought of that when I was writing the book!

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