Who’s Telling This Story, Anyway? #amwriting

The other day, I was talking story with a writer friend, and we got onto subject of point of view.

Now, there are two kinds of point-of-view decisions. One is, do you tell the story from first person (I knocked down the door and strode through, a revolver blazing in each hand) or third person (HE knocked down the door). Occasionally, someone writes a book in second person (YOU knock down the door) — second person is usually, though not always, written in the present tense.

The other kind — and the kind we were talking about — is narrative point-of-view, as in who tells the story, no matter what grammatical person you use.

I’ve had books I just couldn’t get going. Pushing that pencil or those keys was like trying to push a chain uphill. Couldn’t do it. When that happens to me, I know the story is trying to tell me something. Sometimes what it’s trying to tell me is that I’m trying to tell the story from the wrong narrative point of view.

The foremost example is probably the Sherlock Holmes stories. Holmes is the main character, and has all the action and most of the best lines. Yet the stories are better, told from the point-of-view of his sidekick. We wouldn’t be astonished at Holmes’ brilliance, if we were inside his head and knew what he knows and followed his inferences and deductions all along.

If you have a book or a story you can’t get moving, try writing a scene from the point of view of a different character. Maybe a character you thought was just a bit character needs to be more important. Maybe the whole book is actually about what you thought was a minor sub-plot.

Alice Friman, one of my favorite poets, said that everything you create is a thread that’s attached to something in your subconscious. Sometimes what that thread attaches to isn’t what you think it attaches to. Sometimes switching out plot lines and narrative characters can sort out what you really want to say, as opposed to what you thought you wanted to say.

It’s worth a try!

A WRITING PROMPT FOR YOU: Take a famous story and tell it from a different point of view. Or, take a scene from one of your own books and retell it from another person’s perspective.



I was born in Louisville, Kentucky, but now live in the woods in southern Indiana. Though I only write fiction, I love to read non-fiction. The more I learn about this world, the more fantastic I see it is.

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One thought on “Who’s Telling This Story, Anyway? #amwriting

  1. Dan Antion

    April 10, 2017 at 1:15pm

    I didn’t see this until you left me a comment and it occurred to me that “Marian didn’t post yet.” It seems I’ve fallen back off your email.

    It’s weird, because the last time this happened, I signed-up again and then, about 5 days later, I started getting two emails a day from your site. Today, nothing.

    Last week, I was in your spam folder, now this – I’m starting to get a complex.

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      Marian Allen

      April 10, 2017 at 3:03pm

      You’re still in my spam folder. Every time you comment, you go to Pending. I can’t Whitelist you, not even manually! You and Meeka. ~scratching my head~

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  2. Dan Antion

    April 10, 2017 at 3:25pm

    @Marian Allen – It’s bad enough being in your spam folder (I feel so skeevy) but now I’m not getting notifications 🙁

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  3. Anjela Curtis

    April 13, 2017 at 10:02pm

    Nice post! I will definitely try flipping POV or going at a plot from a different angle next time I am stuck in a story line. I’m writing flash for my A to Z challenge. I can use this tip.

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      Marian Allen

      April 14, 2017 at 7:49am

      Ooo! I love flash! Gotta come visit you! I’m wrestling with a short story just now that keeps getting longer and longer, and the deadline is in a few days, so I may not visit until later, BUT I WILL! Thanks for stopping by and telling me you’re doing A-to-Z.

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