The Day the Dog Ate Popcorn on #samplesunday

The dog didn’t eat popcorn on Sunday, not even a sample of popcorn. This is #samplesunday on Twitter, and I’m posting the story “The Day the Dog Ate Popcorn” today. I’m pretty sure I posted it before, but some bad pennies just keep on turning up.

“The Day the Dog Ate Popcorn” is one of the stories in my collection TURTLE FEATHERS, which got a four-spoon review (“Delicious”) in Flying Turtle Publications‘s book review. It also has a bad dog in it, which my cat always enjoys.

my Marian Allen

 We moved from Louisville in search of a clean environment and got chickens. Go figure.

It was what you might call a minimalist flock–three. The smallest was Hennessy. The middle one was Chickabiddy. The biggest, most aggressive one, was Popcorn. Open the henhouse door, and Popcorn would be there, alert, balanced, beak and claws loose in their sheaths. “Go ahead,” she seemed to cluck. “Make my day.”

We had two dogs. Honeybunny was a big dumb blonde; her hobby was rolling in compost heaps. Lizzie (officially, Lizzie Diggumsmacks Allen), was a Cairn Terrier; her hobby was growling.

There were six of us: Myself, Charlie, and the kids (Annie, Beth, Ruthie, and Meg). Six people, five critters. That should have given us the balance of power. How was I to know Mother Nature had her thumb on the scale?

~ * ~

Now, we raised the chickens in a cloistered henhouse, but a day came when we remitted their vows, and they roamed free.

As the day passed, Lizzie studied the chickens, and apparently concluded that these were creatures she could do business with. She shook herself, as a man might roll up his sleeves, and moseyed toward the hens.

“Lizzie’s going after the chickens,” Ruthie warned me.

“She’s not going fast enough to be after the chickens.”

Lizzie began to pick up speed.

“There she goes!” Beth shouted.

Ruthie snatched up a switch: long, slim, whippy, and more suited to elevating impressionable young minds than to driving off determined carnivores.

The terrier struck. Popcorn, surprised by a rear attack, tore herself from Lizzie’s jaws.

I was raised in the inner city; I wasn’t accustomed to the random violence of the barnyard. I screamed. Little Meg, in my arms, tried to climb my head for a better view.

“Charlie! Lizzie’s killing the chickens!”

Popcorn streaked around the edge of the cleared land. Lizzie was right after her, her mouth foaming with feathers. Ruthie began to gain ground.

Lizzie caught Popcorn and Ruthie caught Lizzie. Ruthie thrashed at the terrier while Popcorn flopped, like a boxer saved by the bell.

Charlie pelted around the corner of the house, brandishing his weed-cutter.

The new cry rose: “Daddy’s going to kill Lizzie!”

Charlie dropped his tool and went at the dog hands-on.

Lizzie bit him.

“You bit me, you dog!”

Lizzie knew when to fish and when to cut bait. Now she ran, dribbling feathers and a drop or two of the Master’s blood.

Popcorn yet lived.

~ * ~

“How do you treat a chicken who’s been bitten by a dog?” I asked the vet.

He didn’t answer. He didn’t quite laugh.

“You don’t get many calls about chickens, do you?”

“Not chickens with dog bites, no. Most people–if there’s enough left after the dog finishes–most people turn the chicken’s legs over its head and stick it in the stew pot.”

How practical. How robust. How impossible.

We healed Popcorn’s wounds, but perhaps her heart was broken. Perhaps the shame of being outmaneuvered, then taken in retreat, was too much for her code of honor. Popcorn passed away in her sleep one night and was mourned by all who knew her.

Sic transit gloria chicken – so passes the glory that was Popcorn.

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I was born in Louisville, Kentucky, but now live in the woods in southern Indiana. Though I only write fiction, I love to read non-fiction. The more I learn about this world, the more fantastic I see it is.

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One thought on “The Day the Dog Ate Popcorn on #samplesunday

  1. Chris Graham

    April 6, 2014 at 2:40pm

    Marian, your Amazon link doesn’t work! 🙁
    I got the book at Amazon uk anyway 🙂

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      Marian Allen

      April 6, 2014 at 2:50pm

      THANK YOU! I fixed the link. That goodness for friends who check and let me know when I have a letter out of place. As my grandfather used to say, “It DO make a difference!” lol

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  2. Jane

    April 7, 2014 at 12:00pm

    I love this story. It says everything about family.

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