Ducks on Mars #amwriting

ducks on marsLast week, I talked about too many details overwhelming your reader. This week, I have to tell you about a television show that uses details bee-you-tee-fully.

It’s called Life on Mars. That link goes to the Wikipedia article, but tl;dr, it’s about a cop in 2008 who’s hit by a car and wakes up in 1973. He’s still a cop, but coppiness was so different in 1973, he says it’s like being on another planet.

He thinks he might be insane or hallucinating or in some other way bringing all this out of his own mind. He decides to just go along and do his job and live his life until his mind can’t keep up because, he says, “There are only so many details.”

And this show is, indeed, rich in details. Wonderful details. 1973 is recreated so minutely, I have trouble remembering the show was filmed in 2008. I’m like, “Wow, Harvey Keitel looked so old in 1973 — I can’t believe it. …Oh, yeah, this was 2008.” Or, “That actress in this show looks just like that actress in Life On Mars, but she doesn’t look that much older. …Oh, yeah, that was 2008, not 1973.”

Thing is, almost all the details are just there. The guy doesn’t make a point of remarking on clothes or hair or music. A few things are brought into the foreground, especially in the first episode: The skyline of NYC including the Twin Towers, the guy’s ostentatiously 1973 car, the just-barely-in-the-force female officer. Any detail that’s important is given all due weight — and not an ounce more. It’s impressively done.

A WRITING PROMPT FOR YOU: Write a scene where your character thinks their mind is playing tricks on them.


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I was born in Louisville, Kentucky, but now live in the woods in southern Indiana. Though I only write fiction, I love to read non-fiction. The more I learn about this world, the more fantastic I see it is.

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One thought on “Ducks on Mars #amwriting

  1. Jane

    March 10, 2015 at 9:45am

    Life on Mars WAS Awesomely disorienting, wasn’t it?

    It’s why I keep trying to watch TV:
    I keep looking for shows that can take me through all those commercials without breaking the spell. I have to want to know what comes next THAT much!

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      Marian Allen

      March 10, 2015 at 9:50am

      WORD, gurrl! Those shows are few and far between, though. Got NONE this season. I had hopes for Battle Creek, but no.

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